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The Woodcutter wakes to face the golden sun.
Reminder of tasks yet to be done.

A pile of reddened gold sits by his bed.
His hands reach up to cradle his head.
Silvered tears fall down and wash away red.
He stares at the blood of the life he has led.

Woodcutter, woodcutter, why do you cry?
Why, why, why, why?
Woodcutter, woodcutter, why do you sigh?
Why, why, why, why?


He picks up his axe, now stoic in face.
He heads to the forest without any haste.
The weeping willow widow looks down at her base.
There the Woodcutter examines the place.

Eyes glance over the others around.
Backs turned, roots meekly shuffling the ground.
Slowly his gaze turns to the willow wise.
“Forgive me,” he says, “I’ve come for my prize.”

Woodcutter, woodcutter, why do you cry?
Why, why, why, why?
Woodcutter, woodcutter, why do you sigh?
Why, why, why, why?


Woodcutter, woodcutter, made of sorrow and lies.
At least let me kiss my children goodbye.
Woodcutter, woodcutter, of heartless gold ties.
“I’m sorry. They’re gone, “ is your muttered reply.
Why, why, why, why?

-Music break-

Woodcutter, woodcutter, why do you cry?
Why, why, why, why?
Woodcutter, woodcutter, why do you sigh?
Why, why, why, why?


A Woodcutter heads home, prize over his back.
Gold spilling over in a dark blue sack.
The job is complete, down to the last of the pack.
Then why does his heavy heart feel as if something were lacked?
©2006-2009 ~NobodyAiHeart
:iconnobodyaiheart:

Author's Comments

I was on the bus, daydreaming as usual. The song just kind of came to me. Imagine a band like the Decemberists singing it. How they sing all mournfully, with the chorus in that eerie higher pitch wail. Imagine violins and sometimes flutes. Kind of like the Decemberists' 'Mariner's Revenge' crossed with Death Cab's 'Soul Meets Body'.

A mercenary who used to be only a woodcutter is sent to get rid of a family. He kills the husband first. Then the children. And comes back for the beautiful widow last.


I'm hoping to get a picture of it illustrated in an art trade.. We'll see...

Yes! I know it probably sucks. But… I like it…


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Please do not steal my work. No part may be reused without my permission. :heart:

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:iconusedlotofhell:
Very good, like the ryhme.
:iconnobodyaiheart:
Thanks! ^^ I tried to find words that would work well with what I was trying to get across as well as flow nicely.

I've never been all that good at ryhming though. ^^;

--
Do you believe that sorrow can be as beautiful as joy?
There is beauty in every one of us.
Whether it is admirable or tragic is the only thing that changes.
:iconusedlotofhell:
Nor myself...that's why most of my poems and songs are free verse.
:iconkitty-machine-gun:
its realy quite cool O_O. id love to hear it sung

--
Andrew:theres nothing interdimensional in your head!!!
Dylan:yes there is damn you!!

"nothing can happen until you swing the bat"-haruko

"eating ramen that tastes realy bad, can be kinda fun to"-haruko
:iconnobodyaiheart:
*blush* I've sung it. But I don't think I could in front of people. I'm a really bad singer.

--
Do you believe that sorrow can be as beautiful as joy?
There is beauty in every one of us.
Whether it is admirable or tragic is the only thing that changes.
:icon0-toah-0:
WOW, this is really, really neat. I love the rhythm - though it does hiccup a bit in a place, but really, the rest is very good. Love the imagry and the meanign behind it... I wish I could compose the music to go with it, aha. <333 We should start a baaand~

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